clawdea benat

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Dont we give UP


I see now the reality
we just don't own the weight of this world
live up and just be happy

maybe the past of frustration
saddened us all along
we may never get back the normal life
we had before
cheer up there is more and better to come on our way

all these years of pain and pity of our-self
we don't see the love and care
the help and support of our family
and end up to be a selfish person
but were weak and we are also human not perfect

when we lose hope and faith no more
for we blame of what have we become
its like God is hurt too
And he doesn't want us to be like this

i don't know the feeling of being cared
i may even find it hard over and over
but then it feels how
said to live our LIFE up
and just keep moving FORWARD.

Submitted: Friday, December 20, 2013
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