clawdea benat

Freshman - 742 Points (philippines)

Dont We Give Up - Poem by clawdea benat

I see now the reality
we just don't own the weight of this world
live up and just be happy

maybe the past of frustration
saddened us all along
we may never get back the normal life
we had before
cheer up there is more and better to come on our way

all these years of pain and pity of our-self
we don't see the love and care
the help and support of our family
and end up to be a selfish person
but were weak and we are also human not perfect

when we lose hope and faith no more
for we blame of what have we become
its like God is hurt too
And he doesn't want us to be like this

i don't know the feeling of being cared
i may even find it hard over and over
but then it feels how
said to live our LIFE up
and just keep moving FORWARD.

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Comments about Dont We Give Up by clawdea benat

  • Gold Star - 16,633 Points John Westlake (10/23/2014 1:37:00 PM)

    A rather inspiring poem. Many people should read this despite the slight adjustments needed. Nice work all the same. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (4/27/2014 6:02:00 AM)

    Very interesting poem to read. Very Good (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 742 Points Claudge Ben-at (10/14/2015 1:36:00 AM)

    thank you.. ;)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 20, 2013

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