Elaine Macfarlane

Rookie (East Kilbride, Scotland)

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  • Rookie Mary Reid (4/8/2014 10:34:00 AM)

    heartwrenchingly beautiful

  • Rookie Robin Dyer (4/7/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    i loved it! it made me want to cry! ! ! you have a special gift use it wisely GOD BLESS! !

  • Rookie - 47 Points Rhonda Baker (4/7/2014 7:11:00 AM)

    Your Poem was so insightful, so many I personal know who have gone through this themselves and their children. You captured it perfectly. I felt the raw emotion. Beautifully written
    Rhonda Baker
    Williamston Mi

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Best Poem of Elaine Macfarlane

Cancer Diagnosis

The shock of diagnosis
was etched upon her face
Her eyes and mouth wide open
slow motion, now the pace
“I’m sorry, ” said the doctor
was ringing in her ears
Her nightmares had come true
her deepest darkest fears.

As she slowly left his office
with a cloud above her head
She struggled to remember
everything he’d said
she really can’t remember
how she made it home that day
but somehow she got there
somehow she found her way.

Her heart was thumping loudly
as she made the calls with dread
she tried to tell her family
what the ...

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