Jane Doherty

(i dont really like this, but i thought of it all at once, i've never written anything before and was wondering if i could get a few pointers, cheers)

What've we got to look forward to
tomorrows just another day
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The kids in the line
with minds entwined
find a common enemy
in society
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(just a few ideas...this is what you get when you listen to too much Joy Division)

Even shadows have turned their backs
Can't stop falling behind
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I'm still working on my writing...give me tips to make this flow better. I'm not very pleased with the rhyme scheme, but thats how it came out of my head.


I’m sorry that in my anguish
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Bolts of depression
strike me down
as i observe this procession
The parade of facades
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