First Poem Ever...Help Me Out Poem by Jane Doherty

First Poem Ever...Help Me Out

Rating: 5.0


(i dont really like this, but i thought of it all at once, i've never written anything before and was wondering if i could get a few pointers, cheers)

What've we got to look forward to
tomorrows just another day
everythings so permanent
there's nothing more to say

we spend each day as the last
working eating sleeping
yet, dreaming of living fast
a life free of time keeping

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 06 August 2008

Poetry is a spiritual expression of the soul! Continue to write what you feel....as you feel it. Poetry writing is first a selfish endeavor. So.....go ahead....and..soothe your soul my friend!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success