It's a sad sad day
When the lights go dim
It's a sad sad day
When the sun goes down
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Hi, my name is Laura I'm very new to poetry. Thats pretty mush it. =))
Sad Sad Day
It's a sad sad day
When the lights go dim
It's a sad sad day
When the sun goes down
It's a sad sad day
When it rains
It's a sad sad day
When the moon get's govered by the mist of darkness
It's a sad sad day
When you cry
It's a sad sad day
When I make you lie
It's a sad sad day
When you fail
It's a sad sad day
When you sail in the sea of darkness
Laura, it's a good poem, though it shows asad mood, see mine too. My link is poemhunter/ Ngara fishing ground/ paul mwenelupembe, with regards paul mwenelupembe