Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz
So far away from you
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You....my single love
You.... my best of
I imagine you when i move
Cause without you i’m done
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Believe me, I run from dying
I know, it's so dumb, but funny trying
WAR, around me everywhere
SOLDIERS, killing everyday, I swear.
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