006 Columbines Poem by Lori Boulard

006 Columbines

Rating: 3.7


It is not the death of youth
that shocks us into grief,
but the sucker-punch reminder
we were never in control.

We cultivate our children
like fresh spring bulbs,
nurturing the blossoms, feeding
the roots, wrenching the weeds

around the tender stem.
The backlash of violence
is nature's thorn prick,
the stabbing truth that

despite our tireless tending,
our perfect homes
and pure intentions,
we will never

spade every flaw
in the flowerbed,
every stone in the soil
slowly choking the roses.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 12 January 2007

Oh Lori. This is so sombre and almost defeatest, but well said nonetheless. Danny

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Esther Leclerc 12 January 2007

Lori, this is harsh truth, well told. As parents, we do our loving best; ultimately however our offspring must and will make their own choices. Love and life are scary sometimes, my friend.

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Roger Cornish 23 February 2008

This is the sort of poetry I want to read.... moves. Roger

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Jemarie Ragudo 14 November 2007

I've come across that unfortunate incident in Columbine when I wrote my thesis about the influence of violent video games to youth values. I share your rage at the laxity of our society in looking into this matter.

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Declan McHenry 14 January 2007

A strong piece with a strong message. Well formed and crafted Lori. Sure gets the old grey matter twitching.

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Ronald Stroman 12 January 2007

it really makes me think. if adults took books to fight wars/to gun ranges. would the attitude of the children? ? ?

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Martha Joyce 12 January 2007

Lori, I am not a parent but I can appreciate the beautiful way you presented this thought. Nicely done. Martha

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