ସମୟ ର ସ୍ୱର - 02 (The Voices Of Time-02/ Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ସମୟ ର ସ୍ୱର - 02 (The Voices Of Time-02/ Odia Poem)

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ଇଚ୍ଛା ସବୁ ଉକୁଟନ୍ତି

ବେଳା ଭୂଇଁ ଶାମୁକା ର

ଅୟୁତ ପ୍ରତୀକ୍ଷା ଆଉ

ଭଙ୍ଗୁର ସପନେ,



ନୀଳ ନୀଳ ଲୁହ ବିନ୍ଦୁ

ଦୂର ଅତୀତ ର,

ଝଲସନ୍ତି, ଚୁପ ଚାପ

ଦୂର ତାଳ ବଣେ ।।



କାମନା ର ବିଫଳ ଲହରୀ

ମଥା ପିଟେ ଯଉବନ-

ଶୀଥିଳ ବୁକୁ ରେ ।।


ହସୁଥାଏ କିରି କିରି,

ବିଧବା ର ଲଲାଟ ରେ

ମଲା ଜହ୍ନ,

ସମୟ ର -

ନଈ ସେପାରି ରେ ।।

Wednesday, February 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: time,voices
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poems written during 1985 to 1990.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 08 March 2018

ହସୁଥାଏ କିରି କିରି, ବିଧବା ର ଲଲାଟ ରେ ମଲା ଜହ୍ନ, ସମୟ ର - ନଈ ସେପାରି ରେ ।। Lovely poem Sharing. I enjoy this poem 10+±++++±+++±

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Thanks dear Rajendra ji for your heartfelt remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 23 February 2018

A very beautiful and symbolic poem that very well describes the voice of time in the most perfect way. Love the lines at the end. 10

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Thanks Sabita dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Prativa Rani 14 February 2018

ନୀଳ ନୀଳ ଲୁହ ବିନ୍ଦୁ ଦୂର ଅତୀତ ର, ଝଲସନ୍ତି, ଚୁପ ଚାପ ଦୂର ତାଳ ବଣେ ।। Voice of silence so nicely narrated in this poem. 10+++ for it.

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Thanks dear Rani for your heartfelt remarks.

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beautifui 14 February 2018

Very fine write, good one

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Thanks dear beautiful for your heartfelt remarks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2018

Simply it's an excellent poem..loved reading it.....10

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Thanks dear Sir for your heartfelt remarks and the kind evaluation.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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