ସଖୀ-05 (Sakhi_05) /Odia Poem Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ସଖୀ-05 (Sakhi_05) /Odia Poem

Rating: 5.0

ତମେ ନାହଁ ବୋଲି

କହି କି ପାରିବି

ତମେ ତ ଏ ସାରା

ମାଟି ପାଣି ପବନରେ,



ଶୟନେ, ସପନେ,

ଅବା ଜାଗରଣେ

ତମ ଛୁଆଁ ମିଳେ

ଏଠି ସେଠି ସବୁଠାରେ ।।

Friday, September 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life,desire,eternity,friendship,heart song,loneliness,longing,love,love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 08 December 2017

ଛାଇଯାଅ, ମାଟି ରୁ ଆକାଶ- ଛୁଇଁ ଯାଅ, ଭରି ଯାଅ, ଏଇ ମୋର ତୁମ ବିନା ଏ ଯାଏ ବି ଖାଲି ଥିବା ଜୀବନ ର ନଭ, ଜଳ, ସ୍ଥଳ ।। Great poem shaired 10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Thanks Rajendra for the beautiful remarks on the poem.

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Prativa Rani 04 December 2017

ଶୟନେ, ସପନେ, ଅବା ଜାଗରଣେ ତମ ଛୁଆଁ ମିଳେ ଏଠି ସେଠି ସବୁଠାରେ ।। Great lyrical and melodious poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Thanks Dear for the beautiful remarks on the poem.

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Sonali Parida 04 December 2017

ତମ ଛୁଆଁ ମିଳେ ଏଠି ସେଠି ସବୁଠାରେ ।। Pure love brings the demised back to life. Your deep passionate feelings for her makes her omnipresent. Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.10+

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Thanks dear for the beautiful remarks on the poem.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

ତମେ ନାହଁ ବୋଲି କହି କି ପାରିବି ତମେ ତ ଏ ସାରା ମାଟି ପାଣି ପବନରେ, ଶୟନେ, ସପନେ, ଅବା ଜାଗରଣେ ତମ ଛୁଆଁ ମିଳେ ଏଠି ସେଠି ସବୁଠାରେ ।। Great lyrical ang melodious poem. Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Thanks Rimi dear for the beautiful remarks on the poem.

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Alina Kaikeyi 26 November 2017

ଶୟନେ, ସପନେ, ଅବା ଜାଗରଣେ ତମ ଛୁଆଁ ମିଳେ ଏଠି ସେଠି ସବୁଠାରେ ।। Pure love brings the demised back to life. Your deep passionate feelings for her makes her omnipresent. Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.10++++ for it

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 December 2017

Thanks Alina for the beautiful remarks on the poem.

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