(1) Pretense Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(1) Pretense

Rating: 2.9


Failure safe,
a hiding place,
useless beauty
in his eyes.

Hasty vacuums,
empty sounds
move everywhere.

The taste,
the break,
pretense.

It
all
does
not
make
sense.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2009

philosophical truth penned beautifully! 10+

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