3- Oh Little Bird! Poem by sarwar chowdhury

3- Oh Little Bird!

Rating: 5.0


Oh little bird
My sweet bird!
How can I say
My pain so hard!

Calling thy
Seeking thy
All around all the time,
Feeling empty
Feeling guilty
No rythm no ryhm.

Why thy
Far away
Tell me bird tell!
Nothing need
Only thy
My dear angel.

I let thee
Fly free
As thou wish all over,
Does not mean
Letting me
Thy escape so far!

Am stung
By thou love
No drug can cure
It's thy
Only can
Give me life so pure!

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2008

at your best! thanks for sharing...

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Trinity K 29 October 2008

let out a cry let this day live let me have a deep sigh.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .... wonderful.. plain simple lovely...10+++

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 October 2008

Poetry loves the birds. Think about the nightingale in 'Romeo and Juliet' by Shakespeare, its ode by John Keats, till our 'The Lonely Sparrow' by Giacomo Leopardi. The Mr. Chowdhury's course seems: nature - freedom - love, romantic themes. It seems, I'm not a critic.

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this poem is great i like it

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Wanelisa Albert 29 October 2008

very honest Poem telling of need of a beautiful bird for another! Once again...imagery beautifull and the emtions very real Nice one Dear Poet Wanleisa

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 November 2009

‘…Give me life so pure! ’ Rightly said bird’s song a sure sanitizer of our soul… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page and grace by your comment …please niv

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fine little poem sir.. very nice

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Lovely, cute and touchy.10+++

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 13 November 2008

i LOVE it. it is really wonderful by the imagery, poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant, and welled penned i give it a 10++++++++++++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 November 2008

My pain so hard! ........ it is really wonderful by the imagery; yet poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant...........well penned.10+, thanks fopr sharing

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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