308. All Alone Poem by Jaden Knight

308. All Alone

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All alone he walks by her side
holding an umbrella so they don't get soaked
appreciating her company at all times
and laughing at jokes no one else hears

Though she is a real person
she doesn't even know that he exists
walks past everyday without noticing him
almost as if she is blind
or he completely invisible

She has never taken the time
to stop and talk to him at all
doesn't know how he feels about her
in her mind he does not exist

He loves her with all his heart
but she will never acknowledge him
he has not the courage to approach her
and even though they have never spoken
he still believes there is hope for a future together

At the moment he's happy to keep waiting
for her to notice his presence
until that time he will spend every day with her
if only in his dreams

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2016

At the moment he's happy to keep waiting for her to notice his presence until that time he will spend every day with her if only in his dreams.... a peculiar state of mind.. one spontaneouly asks. why doesnt he have the guts to go to her and tell that he loves her? but he loves to wait until she notices and understands that he loves her..... strange are sometimes our reactions.... you have portrayed this peculiar state of mind in a fine way. thank you. tony

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