.5. All Choked Up Poem by David Threadgold

.5. All Choked Up

Rating: 5.0


Smoking, smoking always choking
Cigarettes from mouths are poking
Lungs receive a constant stoking
Messages are thought provoking

On each packet read the warning
Light one up as day is dawning
Clouds of smoke cough as you’re yawning
First of many smoked this morning

Stubs in ashtrays make you think
Giving off an awful stink
Cough some more and make a drink
Smoke filled eyes that make you blink

Paying lots to make you sick
Prices rising very quick
Now a habit you can’t lick
I’ve heard those patches never stick

We all share your constant burn
Filling our lungs as you turn
Can’t you see our great concern?
Smoking’s bad when will you learn


© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 07 October 2008

clap, clap, clap, strong words of advocate against smoking..i am with you... COPD then to Cancer...can be end results..good verses of deliverance.. Ency Bearis

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Tia Maria 07 October 2008

Woohoo - with you there, another smoke I shall not dare - there is still so much living I gotta do out there :)

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