50 Below Poem by Cory Jensen
50 Below
Without you
The last pieces of my heart are falling through
I don't want to be alone
Everything I need was right in front of me.
I'm so cold
Without you in my life, its 50 below.
Just stay here
I know now that I need you with me.
Without you
All my sunshine has faded away.
Time is short
Its the start of the icy season.
I try
To breathe as the cold air slices through me.
Without your
Heat beside me, I'm as cold as stone.
Its freezing
Since your warmth is out my door.
Its 50 below
My soul is beginning to wither.
I feel
My heart twist as a bitter chill takes ahold.
Nothing it can do
When its 50 below.
Very neat metaphor,50 below. You will never be alone with yourself as a companion and the two of you being minus will make one plus!
this is an awesome poem I must say. i could just imagine it while reading it. I must say that you keep impressing me with every poem. Very beautifullly done
AHHHH! I love it SOOOOO much! You've always had amazing talent as a poet, Cory, and I hope you know that. You're phenominal, and and inspiration for me. I love ya!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I really like the scheme and structure of this one, it makes one salivate for the next line.