6: 51p.M. Poem by Flavio Ferrel

6: 51p.M.

Rating: 5.0

6: 51p.m.
no escuro pesado
do quarto pacato,
ouvindo deitado
o barulho oco
do peito vazio.

6: 51p.m.
in the heavy dark
of the quiet room,
hearing abed
the hollow noise
of the empty chest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 21 October 2008

Great! I In both languages - it sounds wonderful - I can imagine the hollow noise of an empty (heartless) chest. Best regards, one

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success