8 Lines Poem by Chevurcely Pika

8 Lines

Rating: 5.0


How would it be if we were all the same?
If we had the same eyes and the same face?
How would it be if we all looked alike but just had another name?
How would it be if we shared the same problems and the same pain?
How would it be if we made the same mistakes?
How would it be if we spoke the same language and danced the same way?
How would it be if we had the same thoughts and the same brain?
How would it be if our lives were the same?

Wednesday, February 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: all
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgie Hilderman 16 March 2018

Marvelous poetic musings! The uniqueness of mankind is an amazing creation!

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Chevurcely Pika 02 July 2018

Yes it is Thank you Mr Hilderman

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Chinedu Dike 16 March 2018

A brilliant and thought provoking rendition. A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. Thanks for sharing Chevurcely.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 February 2018

Write comment. A great start, Chevurcely. Read my poem, Love and. Thanks

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Chevurcely Pika 28 February 2018

Thank you, I will

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter! You have a broad vision. Wonderfully you have expressed your views in this poem. In material world we are different. We have diversity. But all souls are equal. We have only and one God. He is our father. I am giving you 10 out of 10 in rating.

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Chevurcely Pika 28 February 2018

Thank you Mr. Kumarmani Mahakul.This really means a lot me.You are absolutely right. Thank you

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