911. Ye Girls! Be Wary And Wise! 290608 Poem by Raman Savithiri

911. Ye Girls! Be Wary And Wise! 290608



The present trend of young guys is to have girl friend(s) just to enjoy the life before marriage. For married life, they seem to be obedient to parents, just to enjoy wealthy wife with grand social status. This culture spreads like a forest fire from west to India too.

The use of birth control devices, the number of abortions done by unmarried girls, the number of children thrown in dustbins are increasing day by day in an alarming rate.
Being a mother of two daughters I am bit worried about all girls in world.
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Guys….
Sparkling eyes, mesmerizing smile,
Pointing some co incidents and alike thoughts,
Pleading for a walk, sharing heavenly topics,
They start a new relationship!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!

Guys….
Aiming to enslave you,
Arresting your whole heart,
Making you mad to ignore world,
They tense up the hold!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!

Guys….
Under celestial bodies star and moon,
Sensing your tender body soon,
Hypnotizing that, that is true love,
They craft a graveyard for you!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!

Guys…
Jumping in sky for winning you,
Boasting unto friends like Romeo,
Until they receive their parents’ whips,
They may mark on you by thrilling lips!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!

Guys….
Viewing their chance glorious,
Estimating caste and dowry lavish,
Weighing you and spouse novel,
They bury you alive ruthlessly!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!


Guys….
Killing their pricking conscience,
Holding armor of arguments,
Leaving un-discloseable injuries in you,
They start a happy married life with wife!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise!

Guys…
Telling you to continue unearthly tie,
Taking the hand of practical wife,
They fling you as a used plantain leaf!
You are torn in his thoughts till end of life!
Ye girls! Be wary and wise! 290608
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Comment on comments: Of course it is true because of good people’s existence world gets rain. But can any one explain why there are so many natural disasters in the world in this short span of 50 years more than that of the world witnessed in thousands of years? Please open your eyes and see. Why in China there is tremendous ice-fall which was not seen before. Why there is heavy rain fall in many places to create floods? Why terrific tsunami created untold destructions? In Kuwait this summer there remains sand storm for days together which was not witnessed before. Why we buy the most basic need – water- for money? Scientists say if another world war comes it will be due to drinking water!

For all these effects the direct cause is man’s ignorance and his sins. Will you agree? Human society consists of both rich and poor. Always the poor suffers just because the rich are greedy. (I do not exclude myself) . On the other hand woman is part of man. If one part is suppressed then sure the whole man will suffer. The same holds true for the entire human society. I know in many of the families how women folk suffer. City people will never know the pain of a farmer who gives all his product of toil, still does not have enough food to feed his family. Similarly haughty men will never understand the sufferings of women.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 30 June 2008

To certain extent what you say is true and it is prevelent among the present freelance-permissive-wealthy-high-class-society. Money power can suppress these facts. But poor people cannot afford to lose their modesty due to their poverty.

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Raman Savithiri

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Coimbatore, Tamil Nadu, India
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