926. Dumb Child’s Cry! 130508 Poem by Raman Savithiri
926. Dumb Child’s Cry! 130508
Some say my writings are not clear;
Some say my writings are out of gear;
Some say my writings are from tears;
Some say my writings have many errors;
Yet I continue to write from my heart;
I know You will not toss them as waste!
Words may betray my emotion and pain;
I know You will not fling them as vain!
My lame language tries to build a hidden bridge,
Between our hearts where love is the only wedge.
You, being compassion hearted mother of all,
Will never push my poems away however small!
As a cripple desires for honey on top of a hill,
I the most undeserved crave for Your love still,
Even an earthly mother responds dumb child’s cry.
I know You too will soothe me; thus I ever try! 130508
This speaks of pessimissm, a sort of self inferiority complex. How many ladies of your age come forward to write so boldly and clearly in the website. You have the gift of spiritual knowledge to some extent without which you could not have wriiten so many words in so many days. I salute you for this, my girl, you are really great. {Pinjule pazhuththa pazham) .
there is earthquake in China...it is believed that thousands of children are buried alive...they also would have wailed desperately..neither their ' Earthly Mothers' nor the super Mother could save them...i dont agree and understand the type of surrender you are canvassing....very nice poem....i strongly object to your ' even earthly mother...when i was in Hospital it was an earthly mother who assited me...when my biological mother dies it was another Earthlt mother...my sister grew us up...i have not seen ' Divine Mother ' in the vicinity....wonderful poem from the literary point of view
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 12:38:19 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Talent is the target of adversaries..........so do not worry.Your talents are noted by those who say the things above..................daring expression of honest feelings