Treasure Island

sarwar chowdhury

(Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

A beautiful scenery of relation


The car is mine; I drive it; It runs; Am I not related with the car speed sitting inside when it runs? yes, the velocity of the car has enveloped me; The body of the car is my body; I must take care of me-car body so that it would not collide with other things on the road.
The speed is me-contained
The speed is car-contained

The car is powerless! It has no choice by itself; Just runs as I drive it; And it is me who stimulates the car but when it runs, it runs together with me; At that time the speed of the car and the speed of mine is one dynamism.

My car is running on the road of the Earth;
The Earth has a velocity; It is running with all phenomenon it has
The speed of the Earth is me-contained, and car-contained too.

What a nice scenery! I am strung with all phenomenon here on the Earth! I am separated but joined, I am enclosed with nature but freed; I am related with all dynamism!

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

Submitted: Tuesday, July 01, 2008
Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009

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  • Palas Kumar Ray (9/13/2008 10:31:00 PM)

    Yes, we are all cordinated within nature, creations and possesions.We identify ourselves, identify others in the system by co-ordinates.A telephone number resumbles a face. a voice resumbles days. Nice prose poem, what I prefer to call it.Nice thought.
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/1/2008 4:03:00 PM)

    car still moves when fuelled
    body moves with the earth unstoppable
    warmth arrows to dream above
    and yet unreckoned between the sun and earth....................wonderfully wrought by the imagery 10+, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (7/20/2008 10:16:00 AM)

    very philosophical write, Bob has really put it nicely. indded a beautiful scenery of relation.
    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Bob Gibson (7/13/2008 3:10:00 PM)

    I view my body as a vehicle, i am just inside
    looking out of eyes that see, steering far and wide
    visualize the control tower, here in my head
    i will lose my vehicle one day, then i will be dead (Report) Reply

  • Jessica Golden (7/2/2008 8:40:00 PM)

    This is lovely! Thank you for taking your time to inform me on this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you did. Keep up the great work, Sarwar!

    ~Jessica (Report) Reply

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