The car is mine; I drive it; It runs; Am I not related with the car speed sitting inside when it runs? yes, the velocity of the car has enveloped me; The body of the car is my body; I must take care of me-car body so that it would not collide with other things on the road.
The speed is me-contained
The speed is car-contained
The car is powerless! It has no choice by itself; Just runs as I drive it; And it is me who stimulates the car but when it runs, it runs together with me; At that time the speed of the car and the speed of mine is one dynamism.
My car is running on the road of the Earth;
The Earth has a velocity; It is running with all phenomenon it has
The speed of the Earth is me-contained, and car-contained too.
What a nice scenery! I am strung with all phenomenon here on the Earth! I am separated but joined, I am enclosed with nature but freed; I am related with all dynamism!
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I view my body as a vehicle, i am just inside looking out of eyes that see, steering far and wide visualize the control tower, here in my head i will lose my vehicle one day, then i will be dead
very philosophical write, Bob has really put it nicely. indded a beautiful scenery of relation. Mamta
This is lovely! Thank you for taking your time to inform me on this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you did. Keep up the great work, Sarwar! ~Jessica
On a trip by car in a softly nostalgic set and the car is running away...
A great work is done. Excellent. Especially, the concluding lines are amazing. 10 from me.
car still moves when fuelled body moves with the earth unstoppable warmth arrows to dream above and yet unreckoned between the sun and earth....................wonderfully wrought by the imagery 10+, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great compostion, enjoyed reading it