A Change Poem by Cory The Alchemist

A Change



Too many this time
Too many things went wrong
It started as a wrong turn
Now I'm so far off the path
I might as well be on another planet
My faith that was inches from being destroyed
Is now only centimeters away
I yell at the sky
Challenging God
And His so called omnipotency
Seeing if He really is omniscience
Yelling about the infamous
'If there was a God...'
I have no more patience for God
If God does have a plan
He is slacking on mine
Right then I turn my back on God
Life with God is too painful
God takes to long to work
If only there was a way
For my pain to be eased
While waiting for my miracle
'Life is pain'
A voice in my head...
'Accept the pain with open arms'
'Only then will you obtain Nirvana'
I like this new voice
I follow its words
Before I go...
I turn and yelled at God once more
'Maybe you should take some notes on what this voice says! '
Here I come Nirvana...
or Hell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lauren Watkins 12 August 2008

This is awesome- I love the content and the style in which you write. Yelling at God isn't as effectual when you don't believe...

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