A Cloud Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A Cloud

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A cloud carries
In its soft body
A storm
Or a drizzle

It doesn't ask you
What you need
A storm
Or a drizzle

It's so divinely human
It doesn't care
What you need.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Clouds are vagabonds. And is like "Vaprakrida parinatagaja" as Kaalidasa metaphors in Meghasandesham. That is, a dark rain-cloud is like a tusker playing on the riverside sands with her tusks. Marvellous poem, Nosheen. Loved it.

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Clouds are, as Nosheen says, "so divinely human/it doesn't care/ what you need". Such a nice poem

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Anjandev Roy 24 January 2023

It's so divinely human......significant....

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 January 2023

Embrace what comes our way just like the clouds pouring down without any hesitation. Beautiful poem Nosheen. Happy to be aming my poet friends once again

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M. Asim Nehal 23 January 2023

Very true, fate and destiny go hand-in-hand. Well said. Full *****

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 23 January 2023

cloud has no need anything but need only falling down as drizzling! nice to read

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David Wood 22 January 2023

Excellent mother nature gives what's needed, sometimes in abundance and sometimes she makes us wait. It is us who is impatient.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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