# # A Cruel Me Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # A Cruel Me

Rating: 5.0


that natural calamity
actually....
gave me joy

that person who despised me
stood there barren
losing his all
that person....
just the day before
told me
'you are doomed...
nothing will be right for you anymore'
so sure of himself he was

that natural calamity
actually...
gave me joy

what about the innocent
who have gone...you may ask
they were too innocent
to be living in earth
i suppose.....
god or nature will deport them back
once he has cleansed this hell
that is the cruel me
at least in thought

that natural calamity
actually...
gave me joy

that's not really me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 25 October 2009

joy for you personally and your thought is not a kind one but good write 10

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Smiley Hooker 25 October 2009

I respect whatever you had in mind with that person, Sam. My country also suffered from the devastating effect of this natural calamity. Someone from my country now leaving in another said even worse. My heart goes out to those who were affected by this disaster. I can only offer my prayers. And may God touches the hearts of those who never really understand what it feels like to be in their shoes. I will rate according to my judgment as how you write so effectively. Thoughts provoking and still well done! 10

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 08 November 2009

Reverse swing at the end. That is not really me. And you’re indeed great! Sir! ! Ten++ dr.sakti

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 08 November 2009

Reverse swing at the end, That is not really me.' And you’re indeed great! Sir! ! Ten++ dr.sakti

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Sandra Martyres 26 October 2009

I agree with Kesav...we all need to remember that to err is human, but to forgive is divine...

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2009

to err is human to forgive is Divine...thanks SLN

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i enjoyed it sir. it was what gave me job. i like how it reads.

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