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A Day Without Time

A day without time would be as hectic as the wings of hummingbirds
It would be as crazy as ocean waves on a windy day
But in some way, losing time might be peaceful
It would be as calm as a river with no motion
It would be as blank as your mind in your sleep
A day without time would be the steam from lava and water meeting
A day without time would be wonderfully crazy.

Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, July 21, 2010


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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/21/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    [blank as your mind].....very meaningful title----a day without time/timelessness---is the goal of life

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