A Dramatic Love Relation…
Love is an exciting adventure
No one can predict its risk…
It can be born from a small look
From one word, from the smallest gesture…
In one day, it is enjoyment traveling in your back
The second day it causes you a very bad “disc”…
It is a dream, a bird you can never capture…
Love is so beautiful, so painful, so brisk! ! !
Love is an angry ocean…
Not like the face of the lake…
It is not a changing fashion
Not an easy decision we can make…
Love is a true full emotion
Not a short desire, it can never be fake…
Please babe…
You drive me crazy with your body motion
But move more, scream more…don’t stop! ! !
I don’t want to take any break! ! !
Wael Karameh
April 11,2009.
ohhhhhh that was a strong ending..so beautifully and deeply written..a very true and beautiful definition for the love, , which is ful of pain andpleasure..loved an angry ocean it is and the hero who is able to dive and face and adapt it's waves...
well done and it says a lot in particular with the subject terrific and smooth - mel
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wow what a scream of joy............great powerful ending with fabulous flow of words and fine rhymes.......10