A Dream Within Dream Poem by Matloob Bokhari

A DREAM WITHIN A DREAM
In a dream, I am where meadows are in bloom,
Where days are full of spring flowers
Nights are packed with incense burning tables
Where gentle breeze exhales sweet breath,
Where silky girls with long necks are dancing in arms
Where women, brilliantly white with shinning skin,
Are weaving necklaces of narcissus flowers
Boys are wearing garlands of white violets
Tender girls, wearing royal and rich perfume
Are speaking honey-coloured words with sweet lips
All are happy, laughing and drinking
Singing, dancing, embracing and kissing
Where enemies are killed not by bombs but kisses
Here, everyone speaks sweetly, laughs attractively
With shining faces and happy hearts

COMMENTS: A DREAM WITHIN DREAM
Karyn Walker: Brother Matloob, Love conquers all is what you honestly express, in lines that deserve the best and nothing less.Wishing you happiness sweetness and a penthat continues to compose with vigor and zest! Reaching always from the North, south, east, and west! Sending all my love, ― Karishmananda
Michele Vizzotti-White: Heavenly, thats cool that the boys r wearing flowers. I love the laughs attractively line... people w/ unattractive laughs bother me a little more then they should...well versed or should i say dreamed...
Connie HofackerHemmerichSenter: You dream of peace, my dear friend...I too dream of peace. Beautiful poem, Matloob, thank you, for sharing....perhaps one day, our dreams will become reality. I pray it will be so, in our lifetimes.
Sandra Delussu: where is this place, Matloob? ...it's worth a visit, isn't it? A FAIRY TALE
Donward Cañete Gomez Bughaw: I will name that princess, Donwara. Buwahaha! 😂😂😂
Sylvia Frances Chan: A true compliment for that princess. This is a loveliest FAIRY TALE covered with much senses of passion and true touching for that luckiest princess. Wish she knew what she had left. Here Matloob Bokhari I have brought for you some herbs as you asked as in this Sweetest Fairy Tale. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through this amazing Tale.😘👍👌
Tod McNeal: Thank for you once again for sharing another tremendously superb poem Matloob!
ChanniCharanjit Singh: Detritus and Delights
Muhammad Azam: What a flight of imagination! Very nice
Urvashi Sharma - Excellent job! It Is a refreshing poem. Nice to read. I liked it very much. Keep penning more! Wisdom of thoughts flows in your words thanks for sharing such a great piece.