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Michael Gale
(11/5/2009 12:15:00 AM) |
Rain is just another backdropp in life. But a very important one indeed.
For life cannot be sustained without water dear...Morely needed, as one so near.
Great poem. Ya gotta ten. God bless us all, even when therain does fall-MJG.
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Adam Pinheiro
(10/9/2009 5:34:00 PM) |
a very nice write ;) . to me, it symbolizes the demure, small little tease sum1 enticing will give you, but like the dropp of rain, its there, and gone, in the blink of an eye, sinking beneath the earth, and running from your small reach. short and sweet, but speaks a hundred words :) . 10+
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Eddy Mudbhary
(10/7/2009 10:06:00 AM) |
Alot of meaning in the poem although i think u could hav written it better although i relly did like it deserves a fruitful 8 ;)
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Shreya Chatterjee
(9/19/2009 12:40:00 AM) |
rainy season are the best part of the year...the rain drops are my true friends so as to say...playful and cute..if you choose to get wet...quiet listeners to your heartbeat few you choose to stay inside and watch them pour through your window...they will wipe with you in lonely nights and celebrate life in sultry afternoons...monsoon speaks a lot to me my friend...wait for it the whole year...
you should get a standing ovation..honestly...
with best wishes
shreya
www.wanderer-of-the-world.blogspot.com
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Israh Sadan
(9/17/2009 6:21:00 AM) |
such wonderfully simple words that emphasise so much meaning.
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Frank Lambert
(8/20/2009 4:33:00 PM) |
Hi Carol, I like the simple way you wrote this one to convey the simple, yet deep meaning of your verse. Nice write, Frank
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Sam Yang
(8/19/2009 9:40:00 AM) |
I love your unique style of writing. Keep up the good work. =)
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Myrtle Thomas
(8/16/2009 2:42:00 PM) |
Beautiful Carol, left me thinking about the smaller things in life.And not to take one speck for granted.Oh just a dropp can mean a lot! ! Lovely a 10
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Kee Thampi
(8/12/2009 12:50:00 AM) |
a dropp of rain
fell upon the
dry ground
a promise of
more to come
was gone in a
but a moment
as if never fell
we feel it
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