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dani fries

(2\09\1994 / mississippi)

a fathers love

a dougter so young
just aventuring and wondering
but a fathers love
so protective and controling

yea the two clash
but never end
the father just holds tight
and knows his love will never end

the doughter crying and screaming
saying lifes no fair
father just holds tight
says he knows his love will never end

doughter all grown
and finally moving on
father still holds tight
says his love will never end

i never new
but now i see
he never let go
his love never failed

evan now as he is gone
i still feel it
and its whats keeping me

Submitted: Sunday, June 28, 2009

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  • Gold Fish (10/11/2009 3:46:00 PM)

    So meaningful. Not all daughters possess an obvious sign of their father's love. A father's relationship with his daughter shapes her future relationships with males. Although it's not always a deal breaker, the clear absence of father's love can have detrimental effects in some cases. Thanks for sharing your experience. Cheers.
    A young and rising poet - keep up the good work.

    Feel free to read some of my poems:

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  • Sans Serif (9/2/2009 10:55:00 AM)

    *sniff* This poem actually makes me wish to rekindle the bond me and my dad had. (Report) Reply

  • dr veenaa rai (8/6/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    you touched my heart dear..father's love is so unique, so special, so glad you ve experienced such love in will take you long...excellent expressions! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Shekhar Joshi (7/7/2009 10:30:00 PM)

    nice one.......father's love is indeed strong............

    beautiful work........ ;)

    you need to check the spellings again..........lots of typos in here... (Report) Reply

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