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ViPiNS PUTHOORAN (9/30/2011 10:15:00 AM)
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Beautiful rhymes and flow....
Very enchanting words..
10+++
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Pandian Angelina (7/2/2009 3:22:00 PM)
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Your Love doth flow
Maybe now slow and slow
But, with passing time
Sweetly flowing
Steadily growing
Silently filling
It shall gain strength
And embrace with open arms
The Ocean of Love!
Angel
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Lady Grace (6/16/2009 12:09:00 AM)
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a modern expressions of love..it flows like a spring in the garden of lovers eyes..grace
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Rajiv Kumar Aukhojee (5/30/2009 12:03:00 PM)
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like ur poems specially the last part where the rendez vous in desert and in the storm snow wow thats mesmerising
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Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 8:56:00 AM)
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a repetition of the first line slow and slow in almost every stanza for effects. and the final line of every stanza does rhyme. good flow of writing.
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****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** A ThOuGhT MaTe (5/13/2009 12:17:00 PM)
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avery beautiful and sweet poem...slow and slow the building based on a strong base the love wonderfully grow....slow and slow...the most beautiful effective touching loving show..I enjoyed it..SLOW AND SLOW.................10+++++ FOR three of you
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Myrtle Thomas (4/6/2009 12:15:00 AM)
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Slowly ever so slowly you held me prisoner to this poem. very deep, it flows from one stanza to the next.Vivid a 10
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Bob Blackwell (4/5/2009 5:42:00 AM)
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Slowly and beautifully you have unfolded our need for love 10/10
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