! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Good Way To Start The Day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Good Way To Start The Day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.4


On the horizon
I watch Sun rise;
Now tangerine,
In the blink of an eye
It turns
Colour of corn kernels.

Conjures up
Image
Of fruit juice:
What better way
To start the day
With a glass in the morning
Along with milk and
Corn flakes…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Madhukar 14 September 2009

Just too good, simple with some beautiful imagery and making a flawless transition from nature to everyday life.10, no doubt about it.

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Rakesh Bedi 07 September 2009

Very simple, small and subtle poem, mamta; it made me smile fondly!

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Sandra Martyres 06 September 2009

Agreed Mamta...a great way to start the day....absorbing the beauty of sunrise and the dawn of a new day armed with 'glass along with milk and cornflakes....'

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