(with thanks to Mifael)
The light said STOP
But I did NOT
The light said GO
But I was GONE
HIT! by a TRUCK
KILLED! on the SPOT
Where I shouldn’t have been
If I but
STOPPED.
But I did NOT...
No time to STOP...
So much for LUCK
So, too! the TRUCK
The light said STOP But I did NOT..........When inner light warns us to stop, we must stop other wise we would be crushed by the truck of ill fate............Good Write.......
the flow is very well done and the words finely versed amazing..great job
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With a sparsity of words you offer the reader a lesson on the importance of attentiveness. I like your work. It is uncluttered and quirky and you get your point across strongly. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥