Treasure Island

david kush

(December 24 / south bend indiana)

A LETTER TO MYSELF


I really didn't see it coming
The pain I put you through
All those lonely nights
When I wasn't there for you
I can feel the pent up anger
The hate that's consuming you
I guess I lost my chance at heaven
By the hell I put you through
If we could start over again
Would we feel the same
Or would the past kill any chance
Of ending any other way
I don't know what to tell you
I don't know what to say
But I know one thing for certain
Tomorrow brings a brand new day

Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010
Edited: Friday, March 26, 2010

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  • Karen Gonzalez-videla (8/13/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    Incredible poem! ! ! I loved how you write it and I love the message you give by writing this poem :) You are so talented! This poem doesn't deserve a 10, it deserves Infinite! Never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever stop writing :) (Report) Reply

  • eloida Capuno (10/1/2011 9:53:00 AM)

    good one. self assessment expressed very profoundly though in simple words. hats off to you david (Report) Reply

  • Amy Lalala (6/25/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I feel so stupid! I read this thinking you were writing it to someone else, then when i read the title it hit me like a brick!
    Good work! (Report) Reply

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