david kush

Veteran Poet - 1,744 Points (December 24 / south bend indiana)

A Letter To Myself - Poem by david kush

I really didn't see it coming
The pain I put you through
All those lonely nights
When I wasn't there for you
I can feel the pent up anger
The hate that's consuming you
I guess I lost my chance at heaven
By the hell I put you through
If we could start over again
Would we feel the same
Or would the past kill any chance
Of ending any other way
I don't know what to tell you
I don't know what to say
But I know one thing for certain
Tomorrow brings a brand new day

Comments about A Letter To Myself by david kush

  • Kim Barney (1/28/2016 10:43:00 PM)

    Some people only talk to themselves, but you take it a step farther. You write. It really sounds more like a letter to another person, however, but maybe that's just my way of reading it.
    Well done, in any case. (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/24/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    Verily, regret and hope, well expressed....10 (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster Adeline Foster (2/4/2015 1:48:00 PM)

    How true, sometimes the person that we hurt the most is our self. Anger won’t cure it, time to move on. Read mine – Mitigation -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (11/29/2014 5:29:00 AM)

    Look like confessions of a lover who realizes his follies when slammed with a separation. But, yes, there is always a new dawn after a dark night. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (8/2/2014 8:44:00 AM)

    What a letter, Well written (Report) Reply

  • Karen Gonzalez-videla (8/13/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    Incredible poem! ! ! I loved how you write it and I love the message you give by writing this poem :) You are so talented! This poem doesn't deserve a 10, it deserves Infinite! Never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever stop writing :) (Report) Reply

  • eloida Capuno eloida Capuno (10/1/2011 9:53:00 AM)

    good one. self assessment expressed very profoundly though in simple words. hats off to you david (Report) Reply

  • Amy Lalala (6/25/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I feel so stupid! I read this thinking you were writing it to someone else, then when i read the title it hit me like a brick!
    Good work! (Report) Reply

  • yellowbell alamanda yellowbell alamanda (5/6/2010 2:27:00 AM)

    I wanna send a letter like this to my self.
    10 Votes! (Report) Reply

  • loNeLY AnGel (4/15/2010 6:35:00 PM)

    i love this poem.... wow you got talent.. don't stop writting (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, March 26, 2010

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