A Life Time Poem by angel of passion 016

A Life Time

Rating: 5.0


i hope its along while
so i can always see ur smile
i hope a life time is long
for u i will right a song

seein u in the hallways alot
with u trying to get me to do pot
looking into ur eyes
i have a million sighs

kissing you so much
as soft as me u touch
i see the saddness in ur face
my love is no race

the way u lie
we r a tie
those sweet things u say to me
but i hope some day me and u will be

i wish forever
me and you together
i wish u stay mine
for a life time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 25 June 2009

A wonderful way of expressing the feelings for the adored one and wishing the bondage between you and your love to sustain for the life time.A very optimistic approach of fulfilling the terms of true love.....10/10

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Sunset moonshine 10 January 2009

corny... and don't make sense to me... its good keep writing

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