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David Harris
(8/7/2009 3:46:00 PM) |
Carol a real punch with this beauty. Short and to the point. Top marks and thank for sharing it my friend.
Hugs David
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(6/17/2009 5:44:00 AM) |
i asked him
for a light
he took my life
in a blink..... what reality of life.... oh no words dear but u desrve good 10...
read mine miles to go.. just now posted
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Raj Arumugam
(5/29/2009 5:56:00 AM) |
these power-packed lines deliver a real punch!
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Myrtle Thomas
(5/25/2009 11:49:00 PM) |
Carol I think you enlightened us.Thanks for this lovely little piece a grand read, I saw the light also.
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Ashraful Musaddeq
(5/23/2009 9:33:00 PM) |
Cheers. Too much told with too little words.
10 with pleasure.
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Kesav Easwaran
(5/21/2009 3:24:00 AM) |
Clever imagery Carol...the matchstick talking wisdom bright there...10
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Ben Gieske
(5/17/2009 7:42:00 PM) |
Very nicely done with the correlation of light and blink. It reads so quickly it is over with in a blink, but lingers on in one's thought like smoke after a match is blown out.
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