A Maidens Whisper! ! ! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

A Maidens Whisper! ! !

Rating: 3.2


A gentle call for a piece of ice
Heard from the corner room
Where blue beams of light
scattered over the corridor

Shadows that touch invisible hands
swirling around her body
Could be anyone for your cloudy eyes
But just one for an open body

Sweat from her forehead
Bonded together their monastic pleasure
Swept out with his freedom flag
Which pierced into her heart alone

A gentle cry for a piece of ice
Heard from the corner room
Where blue beams of light
scattered over the corridor.

When blue was not enough
For her monastic pleasure
Long awaits turns into fury
And whisper turns sweat in amber

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A joint poem by Poetheart and Sekharan Pookkat!
Thanks Poet!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2013

Though I cannot quite understand how a poem can be written jointly, yet I found this poem very much appealing. It has an appropriate title and the text is well laid. A good poem to read.

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

a maiden's whisper is a good title for this poem. a good read

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