hello Samantha, with no disrespect, your poem would have read better like this.
Meaning, write from the heart, but edit from the head. Best of writing luck, Jerry
If I'd have held your memory
for one second longer.
I'd have held on to it, before
it vanished away.
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hello Samantha, with no disrespect, your poem would have read better like this. Meaning, write from the heart, but edit from the head. Best of writing luck, Jerry If I'd have held your memory for one second longer. I'd have held on to it, before it vanished away.