Rachel Hill

Rookie - 155 Points (January 26)

A Mother To A Son - Poem by Rachel Hill

Do I have to say 'SORRY'' for your pain and suffering?
Dagger in my heart is the pain I'm feeling in
Nothing I imagined that this could happened
I am so helpless to start all over again....

It seems like yesterday
You are a baby I hold in my arms
Holding you tight
Never to slip out of my hand
Protecting you from danger is what I always have in mind
And watch you grow up into a fine young man....

Seeing you growing up is an experienced to remember
Memories you shared will always be remembered
Having a 'Rule in Life' impresses me further
'Thank you very much' for those years of wonder! ! !

Now you've grown up
Destiny lies in your hand....
Follow the right path is what all mother's want
Dreams you are to follow will only come around
Only if you work hard
Enough to understand.....

Goodbye my son
You are now a man
Spread your wings and follow the light that shine
Letting you go is the hardest thing I've ever done
But I am always here for you
With an open arms! ! !

Comments about A Mother To A Son by Rachel Hill

  • Gold Star - 19,841 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (9/16/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    You are a baby I hold in my arms
    Holding you tight
    Never to slip out of my hand, , , the great care of a real Mum, your anxiety that danger can happen.... then he grows into a fine young man. you are soo happy. But now the time has come you have to allow him to go so that he may learn to fly all alone...... it is the hardest thing you have ever done. you have brought in so much of feeling and emotion in this poem. thank you. You have a real mother's heart. tony (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 155 Points Rachel Hill (9/16/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Thank you..truly appreciated your comment! !

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 27, 2012

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