A Naked Poem Poem by kelvin karani

A Naked Poem

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A NAKED POEM
A naked poem
Struts in my mind.
With a body so fecund
And features proportionate
It holds me in trance

Under moonlight it glitters
Casting a spell on me
In the passion of its embrace
Am trapped, but wish no release

My body’s charged and excited
Its features erect and firm
The poem makes me wonder
Is there a thing I wouldn’t give,
To live this life as my hereafter?

The world’s dying of curiosity
It itches badly and wants to know
“What is it that enchants so? ”
But I’ll give it no glimpse
Of the beautiful poem within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 03 January 2010

'In the passion of its embrace Am trapped, but wish no release'... nicely expressed...your poem comes out with all its beautful imposing nakedness in these lines...i liked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2009

The world’s dying of curiosity It itches badly and wants to know “What is it that enchants so? ” But I’ll give it no glimpse Of the beautiful poem within....to know it from within and delieverin wordsis great job dear..wonderful creation...lovely too..10 read mine i miss.... finally over

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