A Private View Poem by Richard George

A Private View



From underneath I glimpsed her waiting heels
(Third floor at five o'clock) . For seconds flat
I was the ground where ants beheld a queen.

She calls me 'Mouse man' now that I've downsized.
I skip and scurry through her carriage-spokes,
Seek loopholes in her shield in which to hide.

But mice cannot confront the beast that prowls
And barbecue it. They won't raise her roof.
They're horribly susceptible to owls.

So to the womb of terror they retreat.
They worship womandom to sleep alone
And when they walk caress with creeping feet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 15 April 2010

Not sure I quite understand who 'you' are? Man or mouse? The rhythm and rhyme are good and I kind of get the idea, I think? Ruth

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Richard George

Richard George

Cheltenham, U.K.
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