A Shroud Of Mist - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Shroud Of Mist - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


A dark shroud of mist
Wrapped the mysterious valley
A smoke without fire
Running between the great hills
Blinding every passerby.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 15 June 2021

Yes mysteriousness blinds us always and i feel i such situations follow your instincts. Wise words to think over. Good job Rose. Food for thought.

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Kostas Lagos 16 June 2021

A smoke without a fire...Brilliant!

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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

Stunning beauty in these lines. # 5 stars. I wish I could give it more! ! !

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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

Onto my fav list cuz I want to read this gem again and again

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Rob Lamberton 10 January 2023

Way to bring such visibility to the blinding mist!

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Anjandev Roy 18 August 2021

A smoke without fire....brilliant.

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Top stars for this mysterious valley

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Marvellous portrayal of nature at its mystic best. Wonderful as always dear Rose

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Anjandev Roy 17 June 2021

Marvelous piece

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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