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Roger Cornish
(2/25/2008 5:59:00 AM) |
'One more! I'll read just one more poem' The times cracking on... I sit here on my Lap-top... Feel my Wife's eyes on me... Time... Time.... Glad I picked this one.... Wonderful imagery.... Wonderful colours..... But Those eyes are winning....
Me thinks!
RogerXx
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Sue Ann Simar
(12/8/2007 8:05:00 PM) |
Lots of promise in 'A Single Golden Leaf'. I love those copper colors.
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Sal Carter
(1/26/2007 11:55:00 AM) |
i got a tiny flashback of a summer, years ago, when i was reading this. thanks.
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Scarlett Treat
(3/3/2006 10:02:00 AM) |
How tightly we try to clutch that last golden leaf to ourselves before it passes away. And it goes right on as though we didn't have it in a death grip in the first place. Marvelous poem, keep up the good work. Scarlett
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John Kay
(10/1/2005 3:23:00 AM) |
Beautiful extended metaphor. I would consider punctuation, however. This is the kind of poem that seems to need it.
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