Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Sleeping Beauty - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

the sky's beauty
is seen when the world is sleeping
the mind's beauty
is seen when the man is sleeping
the man's beauty
is seen when his fear is sleeping
the life's beauty
is seen when evil is sleeping
the mother's beauty
is seen when your age is sleeping
the wife's beauty
is seen when your right over her is sleeping


Comments about # A Sleeping Beauty by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • (12/24/2009 8:44:00 PM)

    Undeniable truths beautifully conveyed – from micro to macro. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/16/2009 9:11:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, i just love the last four lines, awesome thought.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2009 8:55:00 AM)

    wow terrific...dis deserves a full 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Smiley Hooker (6/17/2009 4:18:00 AM)

    This is quite witty and enjoyable write, Sam. like it! : -) (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    it is a poem that exactly tells what it is, straight and true.the truth touches me.10 (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (6/14/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Let your mind not sleep....otherwise we won't get such excellent themes from you....wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    Samanyan, I agree we should all share as the world belongs to us all. (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (6/13/2009 9:14:00 PM)

    A good take on the sleeping beauties
    Only wonder is how to get into such sleep.

    Anyway you have put the torch on...
    Now we can take the right corn.

    Good one.
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  • (6/9/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Another wise write, let them continue sleepingand the world will be a better place,
    Lynda xx
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  • (6/8/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    let this sleeping continue for a wonderful beauty dream.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2009 1:07:00 AM)

    let these sleeping things sleep forever and make the people and this world a beautiful place....a different thinking here....nice one! (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    a beautiful write in beautiful words while awake........... (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (6/7/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Your write is also beautiful. Nice poem
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  • (6/6/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    good propositions you make (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/6/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    I think you want to see the beauty in its pure form, a situation persists rarely.
    Best wishes
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  • Ravi A (6/6/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    The opening lines excel the rest. We can compare something to something when something is waking instead of sleeping. I think it would make a positive impact also. When we say that something is beautiful when something is sleeping, it means that when it awakens, it can explode the life. When we say that something is beautiful when something is waking, this element of explosion will not be there. It becomes just a kind of blossom. You are only shifting the scale but it gives a different mental proportion. Just think of that proposition. (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    the beauty of your words
    are displayed again...

    the beauty where everyone seem to see
    is again in this lovely poem...

    how can i refuse not to read
    while this is well penned..

    so beautiful dear sam,
    nice to read..naizz
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  • (6/6/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    amazing! !
    Your minds beaty
    is seen in the words of your poems! !
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    Beauty of all facets.................lovely and well said...............Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (6/5/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    it's a nice poem to read! Best wishes! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 4, 2009

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