Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Sleeping Beauty - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

the sky's beauty
is seen when the world is sleeping
the mind's beauty
is seen when the man is sleeping
the man's beauty
is seen when his fear is sleeping
the life's beauty
is seen when evil is sleeping
the mother's beauty
is seen when your age is sleeping
the wife's beauty
is seen when your right over her is sleeping


Comments about # A Sleeping Beauty by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (12/24/2009 8:44:00 PM)

    Undeniable truths beautifully conveyed – from micro to macro. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Rookie Shalini Sundararamalingam (9/16/2009 9:11:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, i just love the last four lines, awesome thought.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Priyanka Bhowmick (6/20/2009 8:55:00 AM)

    wow terrific...dis deserves a full 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (6/17/2009 4:18:00 AM)

    This is quite witty and enjoyable write, Sam. like it! : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Maitreyee Joshi (6/14/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    it is a poem that exactly tells what it is, straight and true.the truth touches me.10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Indira Renganathan (6/14/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Let your mind not sleep....otherwise we won't get such excellent themes from you....wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (6/14/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    Samanyan, I agree we should all share as the world belongs to us all. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (6/13/2009 9:14:00 PM)

    A good take on the sleeping beauties
    Only wonder is how to get into such sleep.

    Anyway you have put the torch on...
    Now we can take the right corn.

    Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (6/9/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Another wise write, let them continue sleepingand the world will be a better place,
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 947 Points Ency Bearis (6/8/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    let this sleeping continue for a wonderful beauty dream.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Seema Aarella (6/8/2009 1:07:00 AM)

    let these sleeping things sleep forever and make the people and this world a beautiful place....a different thinking here....nice one! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/8/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    a beautiful write in beautiful words while awake........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (6/7/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Your write is also beautiful. Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/6/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    good propositions you make (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/6/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    I think you want to see the beauty in its pure form, a situation persists rarely.
    Best wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 431 Points Ravi A (6/6/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    The opening lines excel the rest. We can compare something to something when something is waking instead of sleeping. I think it would make a positive impact also. When we say that something is beautiful when something is sleeping, it means that when it awakens, it can explode the life. When we say that something is beautiful when something is waking, this element of explosion will not be there. It becomes just a kind of blossom. You are only shifting the scale but it gives a different mental proportion. Just think of that proposition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (6/6/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    the beauty of your words
    are displayed again...

    the beauty where everyone seem to see
    is again in this lovely poem...

    how can i refuse not to read
    while this is well penned..

    so beautiful dear sam,
    nice to read..naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (6/6/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    amazing! !
    Your minds beaty
    is seen in the words of your poems! !
    Sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/5/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    Beauty of all facets.................lovely and well said...............Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (6/5/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    it's a nice poem to read! Best wishes! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 4, 2009

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