A Small Insight On Paul's World Poem by Sandra Osborne

A Small Insight On Paul's World

Rating: 3.2


I hear you pleading tears
Screaming please,
Love me,
Please, just once.

I hear you screaming thoughts
Pleading please,
Trust me,
Please, just once.

I hear you bleeding pain,
Screaming please,
Understand me,
Please, just once.

I hear you crying now
Bleeding please,
Don't leave me,
Please, just once.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Warren Augustus De Guzman 20 January 2005

Drives the point straight home. Beautiful poem. I felt the emotion in every single word. -war

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Theodora Onken 19 January 2005

This poem really got to me. I hope that everything had a happy ending...it does leave one wondering...gripping. Good poem! Theodora Onken

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Allan James Saywell 19 January 2005

YOU DUG DEEP GOT RIGHT INTO THIS POEM, enough of the big print a bit of pain coming through i feel it i hope it is tempory With a warmth allan

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