A Small Wish Poem by indira babbellapati

A Small Wish

Rating: 3.3


allow just for once
to lose myself in
the mysterious world of yours
where thought flows across
valleys ocean rivers
caressing a tender leaf here
kissing a dainty flower there
brushing past a rising tide
cooling weary heel by the river
as i lie entangled in your
binding vine-arms...

19jan2010
02.16hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 12 February 2010

caressing a tender leaf here kissing a dainty flower there brushing past a rising tide cooling weary heel by the river.................... as tenderness kisses gloss of green breath of breeze smooches grin of green, wonderful rave up through metaphors, quite elegant too

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Sandra Fowler 11 February 2010

Skillful use of metaphor used to compose this enchanting poem.10, for you. Love, Sandra

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visakhapatnam, india
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