Jazlle D. H.

Rookie (22nd January / Valenzuela)

A Spring - Poem by Jazlle D. H.

I so liked Spring last year
that's the time I've met you dear.
Thrushes began to sing everywhere
like the music you love to hear.

I still like Spring this year
because I know you're still there
like an angel who's always near
and a friend who really care

I love Spring for simply it is Spring
a season for a new beginning!


9th April 2009


Comments about A Spring by Jazlle D. H.

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (7/4/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    The music, the thrush and the sunshine all combine to start a season of new beginning. There is always magic in the air in Spring and you have captured it beautifully. Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Colin J... (4/19/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    Feel the Sunshine in this...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (4/14/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    springing up lines on spring...good rhyming...good piece, Joan...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (4/12/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    What a lovely time of year isnt it, the colours of life are born. Great piece 10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 11, 2009



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