Ours was a story
Of passion
Of secret
Of love
Ours was a story
Of having to let go of something
When how we felt about each other
Just wasn't enough
Ours was a story
Doomed from the beginning
And torn apart
By the clutches of fate
Ours is a story
That will remain precious to me
Something I'll never truly hate
Ours is a story
That can never be lived again
Or told by another
Ours
My dear
Was a story like no other
Bravo! ! ! I loved the repetition and of course the same stanza alla likes. Very very good job!
Ours was a story Of having to let go of something When how we felt about each other Just wasn't enough Sooo true in too many cases. I lived it. Bravo. Poems like this are the reason you should NEVER stop writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I'm not too fond about repetition in poetry.