The life that we live
is just one big story
it has many climaxs
and many reasons
The Life that we live
is just a story
a story that has been told
and come true
sometimes it gets turned around
and then other times
its just like a flow
The life that we live
we try to live it to the fullest
some succeed
and some dont.
The life that we live
is sometimes bad
and sometimes good
it can be normal
or it can be totally different
The life that we live
is just a story thats to be
retold over and over again
Live Your Life.....
A good story this story of life you tell to fold unfold and grows less strife..thank you..iip
A good story I really appreciate your poems and it make me know more about life and I am in good love with your story
What wisdom. I thought you were very young, but that piece of writing was filled with a wisdom born of age. You are either a genius or a very great soul that has a lot to give to the world. And the structure and presentation were just what they needed to be. All praise to you my dear. GW62
Nice thoughts and good flow friend! Well done and keep it up 10/10 :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love the meaning behind this poem.. if i could give some humble advice though, i would say to maybe try to make it more metaphorical by having the 'life' do the actions.. so like from 'a story that has been told' to a story that tells itself, or remains untold... or 'sometimes it gets turned around and then other times its just like a flow' to sometimes it turns itself around while other time it likes to just flow.... but that's just me and not everyone thinks the same, but i do love this poem great job!