A Tiny Hole In A Pot Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Tiny Hole In A Pot

Rating: 5.0


He is so naïve, never looked at the pot again.
Kept filling water in it, day in and day out,
The pot remained at the same level.
When he went to withdraw some water,
There was none for him, except the empty pot.
Be wise and remain alert, always check your pot,
Once in a while if it is ok or need repair,
A tiny hole in a pot will leak everything you acquire.

Monday, May 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 May 2021

Yes, we should carefully check the poet! An insightful piece of work..5 stars

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 May 2021

Awesome! ! !

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me poet yeps poet 17 May 2021

A VERY GOOD ADVICE I KEEP CHECKING MY EMPTY HEAD A BIG HOLE MAYBE THERE MUST CARE

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Deepak S S 20 May 2021

Wise words of Asim.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 19 May 2021

We always forget to plug our loopholes.

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Kostas Lagos 18 May 2021

A tiny hole in a pot will leak everything you acquire. That's what I call wisdom!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 May 2021

Conscientiousness and it's importance in worthy endeavors highlighted well in this marvelous poem.

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Varsha M 17 May 2021

Yes sir a wise advice. Wel thought poem.

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