A Visit In Dream Poem by Snehil Rankawat

A Visit In Dream

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I
Wish to
Call 'HIM' here
But 'HE' doesn't come.
I
Did try to
Get 'HIM' here
But 'HE' didn't Come.
I
Would
Like to call 'HIM' again
Surely, 'HE' won't come.
I
Asked
HIM the reasons
HE didn't speak.
I
Began
To depart
HE gave some words.
I
Heard
It well, HE said
'Creation is my mistake'.

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: divinity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Divinity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vicky Iliaens 04 September 2017

I sure like this one but I'm going to be honest: need to know more about divinity: -) , nicely written work with depth

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