A Wise Conversation Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Wise Conversation

Rating: 4.9


On the hilltop a voice chased me down
and forced to have a conversation
Who are you?
I said; Identifying.
The voice said - Interesting.
What do you want?
I said; everything.
But why you want everything?
I said: When I see anything "I desire to have it"
You are not alone to desire everything, there are many,
And from where you came?
I said; Nothing.
And where will you proceed?
Again, I said; Nothing
Then how will you cherish everything
When the end result is nothing.
And to find the answer - I slide down to the earth
In search of Nothing.

Sunday, October 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 11 October 2020

A wise word from the soul You are not alone to desire everything, there are many, And from where you came? I said; Nothing. And where will you proceed? Again, I said; Nothing

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Jasmine Shayma 11 October 2020

Interesting and intelligent poem. Nice work

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Sebastian G 11 October 2020

A conversation of this quality is purely divine.

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Poetic Sky 11 October 2020

Best conversation with soul on reaching pinnacle

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2020

Nothing! ! ! But something much needed for a lonely heart! Anything is possible in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Suzon Albert 17 March 2023

Awesome poem.

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Mamta S 16 October 2020

Some conversations are heart touching and some conversations are mind blowing this is a combination of both, thank you so much for sharing this wonderful conversation.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 October 2020

We come to this earth with nothing. We go too, with nothing. But while on earth, we want everything. Indeed, a profound philosophy through this interesting conversation. Asim ji, dear Poet! ....Thank you so much. I enjoyed the reading the poem.....5 Stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 October 2020

DJ always appreciate such conversation they are healthy and thoughtful they provide enough thoughts to the mind

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Sebastian G 12 October 2020

A wisely thought poem the conversation between the soul and the heart can never be so interesting otherwise

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